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February 16, 2012

Reluctance [55Fiction #5]


She raised her right leg reluctantly and balanced her petite self on the heel of her left foot.
Bam !! She fell again, and naively blamed the new ballerinas.

'Am I cursed with two left feet ?'

The dog shook his head. The frock he wore danced in approval.
And her mother coyly smiled through the door.

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PS - As you may have noticed, the picture was the inspiration here.

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84 comments:

  1. shash.destroyer@gmail.comFebruary 16, 2012 at 4:15 AM

    That was something else really :)

    Stay Blessed ^_^

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  2. Dee........February 16, 2012 at 5:10 AM

    55 FEVER :D
    awesome :D :D really i have to try only using 55 words and nothing more than that..
    an epic 55 sister.. YOu rocked :)

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  3. Confused SoulFebruary 16, 2012 at 5:18 AM

    oiii this was cute :D

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  4. CYNOSUREFebruary 16, 2012 at 5:26 AM

    that was tooooooooooooo good... :)

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  5. magiceyeFebruary 16, 2012 at 6:10 AM

    this is lovely

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  6. KitchenKarmaFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:08 AM

    Good one, did not get the mother bit....

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  7. Red HandedFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    awwww so cute! perfect lines for the cutest picture!

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  8. BhargaviFebruary 16, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    nice.. and what a cute pic!

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  9. MarkFebruary 16, 2012 at 10:51 AM

    Awww poor little doggie.

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  10. --February 16, 2012 at 2:09 PM

    This is the sweetest! Loved it and what a precious picture! {|:-)

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  11. UpasanaFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    Awww..how cute!! Perfect story on the picture!!

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  12. DimpleFebruary 16, 2012 at 9:14 PM

    awww.. very nice and cute ... loved mother smmiled through the door. :D

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  13. Akshay Kumar GFebruary 16, 2012 at 9:49 PM

    Cute story. :) Very tough to come up with such a nice story with such few words (at least for me).

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  14. ArundhatiFebruary 16, 2012 at 10:10 PM

    Perfect pic for an elegant post! :)

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    1. AyushiFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:52 PM

      actually the picture was the inspiration here :)

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  15. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 16, 2012 at 11:04 PM

    Cutely crafted words for an equally cute pic:)

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  16. Azra RaphaelFebruary 16, 2012 at 11:07 PM

    cutest story for the adorable picture! why do you make me go awwwwww all the time with your posts?

    i'mma sue you!
    just kidding,hehe

    =D

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  17. AmitAagFebruary 16, 2012 at 11:13 PM

    Chho Chweet!!

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  18. CD!!!February 16, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    aww.....cute.....Love all your 55fiction works:)

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  19. RajnishFebruary 17, 2012 at 3:02 AM

    cute..very good.
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  20. Chapters From My LifeFebruary 17, 2012 at 4:48 AM

    Loved this.. the picture is so cute

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  21. BikramFebruary 17, 2012 at 6:54 AM

    made me smile this one .. :) nice


    Bikram's

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  22. cmusFebruary 17, 2012 at 9:45 AM

    Nice.:)

    It would've been perfect if the mother's reflection was there in the picture. Just a parallel thought.

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    1. AyushiFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:56 PM

      couldn't manage everything on my own cmus ;) can I ?

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  23. anatreekFebruary 17, 2012 at 10:00 AM

    The picture and the story, made for each other..made me smile :)

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    You've been tagged :D

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  25. AbhraFebruary 17, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    Wow, it is so nicely written.

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  26. MadhushaFebruary 17, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    awwwwwwwwww.so CUTE! :)

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  27. SoniaFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:44 AM

    Awwww.. Your blog is so lovely.. The picture used here is too cute and your words brought a big smile on my face:)

    Thanks for following:)

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  28. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2012 at 1:00 AM

    :)

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  29. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2012 at 1:02 AM

    haha

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  30. vinayFebruary 18, 2012 at 4:03 AM

    lovely... :) :)

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  31. sumukh bansalFebruary 19, 2012 at 1:16 AM

    a innocent question on little girl face and a smile on mine..

    nice one..

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  32. Anuradha ShandilyaFebruary 19, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    While going through the image gallery of my phone, to my cousins/friends, I always introduce you as a superb blogger and that's what you are :*
    God Bless You :)

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    1. AyushiFebruary 26, 2012 at 11:00 PM

      :D Aren't you the sweetest ;):)
      Thank you Anu :*

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  33. phaticharFebruary 20, 2012 at 4:25 AM

    Ha ha..cute.

    You know, I could never do this - write with a picture for inspiration.

    This was priceless :)

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    1. AyushiFebruary 26, 2012 at 11:00 PM

      Oh sure as hell you can :)
      You just won't give it a try ;)

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  34. Of Prisms and LivesFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    Nice post.U write really well .

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  35. sheril benedictFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:08 AM

    cute :))

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  36. Blasphemous AestheteFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    Cute post.

    The dog in frock reminds me of the Dog Nanny from Peter Pan movie, always taking care of the young ones.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    simple and soo cute!!! :)

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  42. CookieCrumbsInc.February 25, 2012 at 5:41 AM

    Okay, I can't help but go 'aww' at this, you must excuse me:)

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  43. AyushiFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    indeed it was :)

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  44. Nirati February 28, 2012 at 3:43 AM

    Awwww. This was really truly adorable.
    You're amazing at #55 fiction.
    *bows*
    x

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  45. AyushiFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:36 PM

    Thank you love :)

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  46. VarshaFebruary 29, 2012 at 10:11 AM

    love it!

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  47. Miss KomalMarch 4, 2012 at 10:34 PM

    choo cute!!

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  48. muthuAugust 10, 2012 at 12:16 AM

    hmhm - sweet.

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