The scent of the sandal incense sticks left no corner of their house untouched by its warmth. It made them feel at home. It made home smell like home. Anushree's elder daughter was dressing up for school while reciting a poem for an inter-school competition, determined to win this time. She packed three loaves of bread and butter for lunch and kissed her good luck. Her husband, no matter how early he woke up, was always late for work. Half eating his breakfast, he rushed to catch the last bus just in time. She waved him a quick goodbye. She always postulated, if a person leaves home with a smile, he comes back with a wider one. Her mother never let her father leave home without a hug which matured into a formal one over the years, yet never was the ritual broken.
Her younger daughter was still in bed. She hugged her in her sleep and tried to cuddle off her morning weariness. Surprisingly enough, she hugged her back. She had named her daughter after her grandmother. She wished her a happy morning in a singsong voice. A couple of minutes later, her little girl got out of bed and switched on the TV. Watching Uncle Scrooge dive into his ocean of coins elated her. Anushree folded her quilt and shouted 'Do I have to tell you to brush your teeth everyday ?'. She scorned her way to the bathroom and lazily scrubbed her teeth. She cleaned herself up and a splash of water removed the last traces of sleep and pillow marks from her face.
Browsing through the channels now and eagerly waiting for her chocolate milk, she came across the new Vodafone ad that claimed to have special caller tunes and greetings for some day that started with a V and had an unexpectedly long spelling. She couldn't pronounce it and blamed the ad for being too small for her to grasp the pronunciation properly. She changed the channel and found the same mention there too. And then, another one. She baby-stepped into the kitchen and asked Ma about this special day that was supposed to be occurring tomorrow. She wanted to make all the necessary arrangements before her friends, if the said day was so important.
Anushree was bewildered. She hadn't practiced an answer to this question of her influential 9 year old. She wanted to keep her girls away from this day, as far away as possible. She picked her up, made her sit on the kitchen slab and went back to chopping carrots for the mix-vegetables she was cooking for lunch. After a lot of probing and stubborn insistence, Anushree struggled to pick up the right words. 'You know I love your Father, right ?' She nodded in happy approval and smiled. Anushree could spot her missing milk-tooth. 'Well, it is a special day where I let him know that in words'. Her daughter mouthed Ohhh and slid back to the floor. Her frock frolicked with every step she took, apparently in amusement of this newly found special information about tomorrow.
'Where are my oil pastels Ma ?' She demanded with urgent patience. They were kept in the third drawer of her cupboard and Anushree found them for her.
The next morning, Anushree found a red-bordered page peeking out from under her daughter's pillow. It looked like a page from her maths notebook because of the tiny translucent grey squares all over it. She picked it up, it looked like a card with little flowers and leaves sprinkled unevenly all over it. She opened it and her face broke into a million smiles. Very carefully, she shoved it back in and waited for the precious moment when her daughter would give it to her.
The card read -
Happy Special Day, Ma.
I want to let you know in words that I love you very much.
It was the most beautiful Valentine's gift she had anticipated in years.
Browsing through the channels now and eagerly waiting for her chocolate milk, she came across the new Vodafone ad that claimed to have special caller tunes and greetings for some day that started with a V and had an unexpectedly long spelling. She couldn't pronounce it and blamed the ad for being too small for her to grasp the pronunciation properly. She changed the channel and found the same mention there too. And then, another one. She baby-stepped into the kitchen and asked Ma about this special day that was supposed to be occurring tomorrow. She wanted to make all the necessary arrangements before her friends, if the said day was so important.
Anushree was bewildered. She hadn't practiced an answer to this question of her influential 9 year old. She wanted to keep her girls away from this day, as far away as possible. She picked her up, made her sit on the kitchen slab and went back to chopping carrots for the mix-vegetables she was cooking for lunch. After a lot of probing and stubborn insistence, Anushree struggled to pick up the right words. 'You know I love your Father, right ?' She nodded in happy approval and smiled. Anushree could spot her missing milk-tooth. 'Well, it is a special day where I let him know that in words'. Her daughter mouthed Ohhh and slid back to the floor. Her frock frolicked with every step she took, apparently in amusement of this newly found special information about tomorrow.
'Where are my oil pastels Ma ?' She demanded with urgent patience. They were kept in the third drawer of her cupboard and Anushree found them for her.
The next morning, Anushree found a red-bordered page peeking out from under her daughter's pillow. It looked like a page from her maths notebook because of the tiny translucent grey squares all over it. She picked it up, it looked like a card with little flowers and leaves sprinkled unevenly all over it. She opened it and her face broke into a million smiles. Very carefully, she shoved it back in and waited for the precious moment when her daughter would give it to her.
Happy Special Day, Ma.
I want to let you know in words that I love you very much.
It was the most beautiful Valentine's gift she had anticipated in years.
Awww...this has to be the cutest story i have ever read!! The picture is just perfect for the story!! Your description created such beautiful images in my head, the imagination itself made me smile! Kudos!!
ReplyDeleteMy world, my thoughts, my musings...
I like to tingle with people's imaginations :):D
DeleteThank You Upasana :)
Hey, I remember doing this for mom and that too on V-day itself:) This post made me smile:)Loved it.
ReplyDeleteCD :) I fictioned this up and if you really did this, then you are the cutest daughter they could ever have :)
DeleteD'awwwwwwwww :) That would make my V-Day.
ReplyDeleteAnd mine too :)
DeletePriceless :')
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Wasn't it ;)
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ReplyDeleteone of the best for 'special day'...
Thank You Sumukh :)
Deleteawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :) This reminds me of the cute baby ad , the kajol one in which the baby hugs her shadow :D :D . Kids are just too cute
ReplyDelete:D Aren't they ? I love'em too :)
DeleteAwww...how cute ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank You Anu :*
DeleteTRUE LOVE :) amazing piece,, though it is fictitious it has a strong message..
ReplyDeleteGreat one
Thank You Deepak :)
DeleteLove could not be described in a better way. There is definitely no better and true love like that between a mother and her child. Beautifully written Serendipity :)!!!
ReplyDeleteSuperb post , beautifully written n the way you concluded Valentine's day is marvellous n entirely different...:)
ReplyDeleteI just wished to get this special rid of all the mushy shit :)
DeleteBeautiful read...I love this line to the core and wish to adopt it in my life...
ReplyDelete"She always postulated, if a person leaves home with a smile, he comes back with a wider one."
My mother believes in it too :)
DeleteAwww...so cute. Is it really fiction? Anyway Happy Special Day to you too :)
ReplyDelete200% fiction. Although I would've been happy if it wasn't and something like this had happened when I was 9 ;)
DeleteWhat a fantastic piece and a fantastic blog, following you now!
ReplyDeleteThank You Cranky :)
DeleteHappy Valentines! May love come to you! :)
ReplyDeletePost was well written!
Thank You sweetie :)
DeleteAww, such a sweet story! I loved it! Have a Happy ♥ day :*
ReplyDeleteI wish you had fun too Finny :)
DeleteValentine's Day is all about giving; and this story brings it out beautifully
ReplyDeleteOkay, now, I am a little doubtful whether you've read the piece or not, but Thank You anyways :)
DeleteThe sweetest post on Valentine I came across so far! It had to be from you:)Enjoy the day...
ReplyDeleteThank You Rahul :)
Deletethat was so unexpectedly sweet! i was prepared for a story of unrequited love and the works, and u give me the adorablest love story. makes me go aw................!
ReplyDeleteThank You Raphael :)
DeleteThat was encouraging :)
Wonderfully written...and that's an cute picture:)
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's Day!
True it is :)
DeleteBlissful, beautiful, innocence of a child!
ReplyDeleteLovely Post!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Nothing beats a child's love :)
Deletenice, inspiring stories like this which makes our day...simple yet cogent.
ReplyDeleteThank You Nitin ;)
DeleteThis wasvery beautiful!!! i am pretty weak in front of strong emotions, so I dont mind saying that I soooo loved the ending :)
ReplyDeleteI wanted my readers to love the ending :)
DeleteHow adorable is this!.
ReplyDeleteGood one !
Thank You Sangeet :)
DeleteGreat!! :) Brilliantly put down in words :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Iyshu :)
Deletewonderful story
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Thank You Chirag :)
DeleteLoved the simple build-up and the way the post showcases the truth about love.
ReplyDeleteThank You Subhorup :)
DeleteSerendipity :) You are too too good, girl! Just so beautiful, so lovely. I loved every line of it. Every bit of it :)
ReplyDeleteMade me remember myself as a kid making cards, watching Duck Tales..
You writing leaves me speechless. I mean it :)
That was the sweetest comment made on this write-up Juhi :)
DeleteDid I tell you I love your name :)
I watched Ducktales this morning with breakfast, reminded me of my childhood too :)
Lovely :)
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DeleteThank You Akshay :)
Awww that was sweet and the image is superb!
ReplyDeleteLove between parent-child is the purest. :D
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DeleteThank You for the award Love, I grabbed it :)
This little fiction of yours touched and moved my heart. I am amazed by the little girls lovely heart which wanted to wish her mom in words after learning the importance of the day. And I think those little moments are the best moments of anybody's life.
ReplyDeleteExactly the purpose of my blog :)
DeleteThis is first rate writing. Every single comma is in place and the sense of composition is marvelous. Reading even one piece like this makes my day, thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank You Satish :)
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ReplyDeleteExactly what I wanted to portray :)
ReplyDeleteThis is getting better each day... :)
ReplyDeleteI was waiting to hear from you on this one :) Thank you Sri :)
DeleteSuch a nice description....love it
ReplyDelete"Urgent patience"... awesome
Thanks Varsha :)
DeleteAwwww..Thats so incredibly sweet!! following you!!
ReplyDeleteNice story! The little girl bit reminded me of my Asha in- The coin collection!
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