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February 16, 2012

Reluctance [55Fiction #5]


She raised her right leg reluctantly and balanced her petite self on the heel of her left foot.
Bam !! She fell again, and naively blamed the new ballerinas.

'Am I cursed with two left feet ?'

The dog shook his head. The frock he wore danced in approval.
And her mother coyly smiled through the door.

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PS - As you may have noticed, the picture was the inspiration here.

89 comments:

  1. That was something else really :)

    Stay Blessed ^_^

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  2. 55 FEVER :D
    awesome :D :D really i have to try only using 55 words and nothing more than that..
    an epic 55 sister.. YOu rocked :)

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  3. that was tooooooooooooo good... :)

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  4. Good one, did not get the mother bit....

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  5. Aww. That was so cute. Both the Story and the Picture :-)

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  6. awwww so cute! perfect lines for the cutest picture!

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  7. This is the sweetest! Loved it and what a precious picture! {|:-)

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  8. Awww..how cute!! Perfect story on the picture!!

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  9. awww.. very nice and cute ... loved mother smmiled through the door. :D

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  10. Cute story. :) Very tough to come up with such a nice story with such few words (at least for me).

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  11. Perfect pic for an elegant post! :)

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    1. actually the picture was the inspiration here :)

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  12. Cutely crafted words for an equally cute pic:)

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  13. cutest story for the adorable picture! why do you make me go awwwwww all the time with your posts?

    i'mma sue you!
    just kidding,hehe

    =D

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  14. aww.....cute.....Love all your 55fiction works:)

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  15. cute..very good.
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  16. Loved this.. the picture is so cute

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  17. Nice.:)

    It would've been perfect if the mother's reflection was there in the picture. Just a parallel thought.

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    1. couldn't manage everything on my own cmus ;) can I ?

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  18. The picture and the story, made for each other..made me smile :)

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  20. Awwww.. Your blog is so lovely.. The picture used here is too cute and your words brought a big smile on my face:)

    Thanks for following:)

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  21. a innocent question on little girl face and a smile on mine..

    nice one..

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  22. While going through the image gallery of my phone, to my cousins/friends, I always introduce you as a superb blogger and that's what you are :*
    God Bless You :)

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    1. :D Aren't you the sweetest ;):)
      Thank you Anu :*

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  23. Ha ha..cute.

    You know, I could never do this - write with a picture for inspiration.

    This was priceless :)

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    1. Oh sure as hell you can :)
      You just won't give it a try ;)

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  24. Cute post.

    The dog in frock reminds me of the Dog Nanny from Peter Pan movie, always taking care of the young ones.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  30. Okay, I can't help but go 'aww' at this, you must excuse me:)

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  31. Awwww. This was really truly adorable.
    You're amazing at #55 fiction.
    *bows*
    x

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