It seemed
like a subtle mischief of the sky,
A little rain, a little change, was needed to discover, Who was I.
Leaves swam away with the cold breeze, not knowing why,
there was this sudden tease.
The carefree wind mellowed into a lullaby, making my senses dance,
Oh! wait, This is me ! A part of me, where I never threw a glance.
'Come, ride with me' , coaxed the wind,
Only if I knew, how it was such a beautiful trance.
The carefree wind mellowed into a lullaby, making my senses dance,
Oh! wait, This is me ! A part of me, where I never threw a glance.
'Come, ride with me' , coaxed the wind,
Only if I knew, how it was such a beautiful trance.
I walked like the air I breathe, on the grass so green, in the gloomy lane,
as the cotton clouds played, and sprinkled the Summer Rain.
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PS - Surabhi Surendra from Womanatics has started a series of interviews on her blog featuring her fellow bloggers, who have impressed her with their work. I have been obliged to be her first. Head over :)
That was really sweet :) It describes summer rain quite well. One of the true blisses in life. A lovely spot of rain, or a cool breeze, on a summers day.
ReplyDeletevery sweet, Serendipity. And congrats on that interview:)
ReplyDeleteI alwys wanna to write a poem but i suck in writin one... And i so much admire ppl who write a poem.. I meant i admired yur poem :)
ReplyDeleteIt's so sweet as rain...
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Very cheerful and lovely poem :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it :)
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Lovely poem ☺
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ReplyDeleteCongrats on the interview and a vibrant poem :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully desribed! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem,this one!
ReplyDeleteAnd congrats on the interview! :D
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wowo that is lovely poem ..
ReplyDeleteand congrats on the interview
Bikram's
I could just flow with your words....amazing! Congrats
ReplyDeleteThis brightened up my day! Thank YOU!
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very beautiful..loved it
ReplyDeleteSuperb! :)
ReplyDeleteA true capture of the spirit of rain!Congratulations for being the first one to lead in the interview:)
ReplyDeleteLoved it..esp the title..kinda remind me of the song "Summer breeze"..
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