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June 2, 2012

Life is Short ?



They say "Life is short"
I say,
Aye fools, Don't you know ?
what really counts,
is all the happiness beyond those years.
Leave no desire untouched,
Let no passion stay unconcerned,
for it is only you, that matters.
If life offers a chance, Take it,
Let it explore 'You'.
Exchange a shy glance,
Leave your fate, for once, to chance.
Let the summer breeze wash away the guilt and the fears,
for, what really counts,
is all the happiness beyond those years.


PS - Lately, Poems have been growing on me. Kindly do tell, how I fare ? And is rhyming really all that important ? Because mine blatantly refuse to rhyme.






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41 comments:

  1. Silence Unplugged.June 2, 2012 at 10:42 AM

    Wow! I was thinkig something so so so similar lines.

    Also, u r doing great with poems. And, rhyming makes a poem very lame! So, no.. it aint important at All :P :P <3

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  2. Vinay Leo R.June 2, 2012 at 11:01 AM

    Nah. Rhyme is not always part of poetry, emotion matters too.. And you got a lot in this. Direct expression, and it says what it needs to say. Stop living your life thinking you'll die, and just live when you can.. because happiness doesn't need to end even after death. Nice poetry.

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  3. Nirati June 2, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    your blog looks SO GORGEOUS !!
    I'm in love with the whole layout, the awesometastic header, the pretty colors, the font, everything!
    And this was a beautiful poem. I agree, it's the life in the years, not the years of life.
    xx

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  4. Aditi PathakJune 2, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    Nah, I don't think rhyming words are necessary. Its just to give poetry a catchy note. BTW, Nice poem ^_^

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  5. MarkJune 2, 2012 at 2:34 PM

    Rhyming isn't very important. They aren't needed at all. I really liked this too :) You're poems are good, so do keep at them :)

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  6. Cool4uJune 2, 2012 at 7:11 PM

    Your poetry is not really in the same league as "John Keats", but its nice. Keep going.

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  7. Confused SoulJune 2, 2012 at 9:03 PM

    Babe... It does not matter if you rhyme or not.. Your poems touch the heart...leave an impression and that's what counts :)

    And this again is the best morning read..
    P.S. Pretty blog :D ♥

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  8. NehaJune 2, 2012 at 10:56 PM

    Beautiful expressions. Especially loved the line "Leave your fate, for once, to chance."
    Nice work and flow of the poem is what matters and you are great at it :)

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  9. Carnett RoseJune 2, 2012 at 10:59 PM

    Rhyming is not necessary, at least in my opinion. To me, poetry is all about painting a subtle and yet striking picture of the subject with a few words.

    And you succeed at doing the same. :)

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  10. JayadevJune 3, 2012 at 3:28 AM

    A thought that is a part of every living human mind from the time the first one walked this planet ... how long, when .. we know not.

    So it's time to have fun, let others have fun and try to be of some use to others!

    Good poem .. and you don't have to worry about rhyming lines.

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  11. Jayashree SrivatsanJune 3, 2012 at 5:22 AM

    For one its beautiful and the meaning is conveyed perfectly. I loved it :)

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  12. BikramJune 3, 2012 at 5:39 AM

    YEsssssssssss exactly my thoughts .. live as if today is last day , do what you want to do , what the heart desires .. who knows wat will happen tomorrow ..


    Bikram's

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  13. UnknownJune 3, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    A free flowing poem straight from your heart:))

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  14. Blasphemous AestheteJune 3, 2012 at 6:48 AM

    Poems and rhymes, I'll quote A Pope on this,

    "'Tis with our judgments as our watches, none
    Go just alike, yet each believes his own.
    In Poets as true Genius is but rare,
    True Taste as seldom is the Critic's share;
    Both must alike from Heav'n derive their light,
    These born to judge, as well as those to write.
    Let such teach others who themselves excel,
    And censure freely who have written well;
    Authors are partial to their wit, 'tis true,
    But are not Critics to their judgment too?"

    So, now you tell, how did you fare?

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  15. SonshuJune 3, 2012 at 7:09 AM

    That's fine because you are good at poetry. Wow. I literally read it again and again. :)

    Also, I like how you convey so much in such short posts, really means a lot. You are a wonderful writer.

    Love,
    Sonshu
    www.thesonshu.com

    P.S: Read my novella at thecrypticbysonshu.blogspot.in

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  16. Sri ValliJune 3, 2012 at 8:03 AM

    Beautiful poem with beautiful message :)...

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  17. HardiJune 3, 2012 at 4:40 PM

    Loved it! And there's no need for any rhyming when you can write as amazing as you did!

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  18. UnknownJune 3, 2012 at 8:09 PM

    lovely poem beautiful msg minus d rhyming :)

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  19. A Silent Realm Of An Introvert.June 4, 2012 at 12:50 AM

    As John Keats says,
    "Poetry should be great and unobtrusive, a thing which enters into one's soul, and does not startle it or amaze it with itself, but with its subject."
    -Letter to John Hamilton Reynolds (Februrary 3, 1818).

    Hence, I made my point. Nice.

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  20. Rajesh DharmarajanJune 4, 2012 at 1:05 AM

    Pretty one :) Beauty of your post lies in its simplicity and don't mind about the rhyming!

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  21. UnknownJune 4, 2012 at 2:15 AM

    Nice lines dear.. :)
    keep writing...

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  22. Tripthi BattapadiJune 4, 2012 at 3:16 AM

    Loved it!!
    Happy poems make me happy! :)

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  23. Nidhi MahajanJune 4, 2012 at 3:25 AM

    Rhyming is not that important. I loved this short poem! Its just to pretty and so true!

    I am writing a short online novel. Would love your feedback!
    Before Snow Falls

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  24. RajnishJune 4, 2012 at 5:25 AM

    wow lovely poem with a point.
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.co

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  25. HarshaJune 4, 2012 at 5:56 AM

    That was a lovely cheery poem :):) And as for rhyming, I don't think it should be forcible. It is good if it rhymes, but then it's not that important. :)

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  26. Geeta SinghJune 4, 2012 at 7:53 AM

    wat a beautiful poem :)

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  27. PanchaliJune 5, 2012 at 1:32 PM

    Perfectly captures the breathless emotions. And yes, rhyming is no more a definite part of poetry !Free verses are common and they come to me easily too...:) I prefer them , anyday! Lovely piece...

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  28. Suraj GhimireJune 5, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    beautiful poem!!!
    loved it....

    and yeah, beautiful blog too!!!!
    keep penning..
    regards
    suraj

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  29. UnknownJune 6, 2012 at 1:38 AM

    nice one...

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  30. AnonymousJune 6, 2012 at 3:32 AM

    This is as beautiful as it can be. rhyme isn't important as long as it touches a chord...and it touched many.

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  31. idea molesterJune 6, 2012 at 5:05 AM

    It's a wonderful start... well a lot of people may tell you that poems must rhyme, but it doesn't really has to... It's a necessary only if you are writing a song.

    You have started well, and should continue writing. There is a certain level of incoherence in your poem's meter, but don't think about it. It will improve as you continue writing. Also, try reading as many poems as you can, I recommend the Romantic Era...

    Regards,
    Narendra

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  32. BhavanaJune 6, 2012 at 8:40 AM

    Nice...fine attempt:)

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  33. Someone is SpecialJune 6, 2012 at 2:29 PM

    Rhyming isn't important at all. "beautiful poem" - keep blessing more..

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  34. Mr.MiglaniJune 6, 2012 at 10:15 PM

    Awesome

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  35. ViyomaJune 9, 2012 at 2:01 AM

    Whoa! I find that disclaimer (Mine just refuse to rhyme) below the poem, very catchy.

    Rhyme or no rhyme- they make sense in a positive way. And that matters.

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  36. UnknownJune 9, 2012 at 3:18 AM

    This one's perfect dear. And I really dont see a need of rhymes in poems. You are doing a wonderful job!

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  37. ZeebsJune 10, 2012 at 1:18 AM

    Randomly stumbled across your blog. I love this. It speaks to me. You've got a new follower :)

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  38. phaticharJune 14, 2012 at 9:17 PM

    I've always maintained you have a thing for poems, haven't I? :)

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  39. AshJune 17, 2012 at 7:49 AM

    beautifully written :)

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  40. mohamedali jinnahJune 18, 2012 at 10:11 AM

    Art is long, life is short

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  41. GowardhanJuly 13, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    for, what really counts,
    is all the happiness beyond those years.

    amazingly said Ghazala

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