Empty.
Serene.
Calm.
The
message, that your eyes convey.
Once again,
We met, we
talked
You held my
hand,
for I
feared getting lost,
Again.
A gesture
so little,
carried
meanings so deep,
Yes, in
plenty.
Seasons
came,
Seasons
went.
But You and
I,
Stayed
aloof.
I see the
inky sky,
I feel the
grass,
And I know
that bird,
who mocks
my love.
I have, no
qualms,
no regret,
for I
realize, you're not the soul I loved,
But I know
pain,
excruciating
raw pain.
And,
Once again,
I slip into
sweet oblivion,
As we grew
apart.
AN intense and lovely one !
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