There, she rested, quiet and cold;
Deranged, defeated, no more a rich color of gold.
She fought the wind, met her end with a heart so brave,
The strength that most men wish for, from cradle to grave.
PS - All of my work on this blog will hereby be signed as
‘Ayushi’. I have bid adieu to my alias - 'Serendipity'. Writing no more happens
to me by accident, it comes from within, its a natural flow now.
I'll kind of miss Serendipity :) This was short but sweet, and melancholic really.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely splendid,Ayushi!
ReplyDeleteWahaaoo Ayushi :D ..
ReplyDeleteWay ta go...
And post... AMAZING :D
beautiful
ReplyDeleteHappy to discover you, Aayushi :)
ReplyDeleteHappy writing!!!
wonderful post..
ReplyDeleteFlow of words is superb Ayushi. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteA leaf can not be exprrssed in a more beautiful way than this one. well done.
Ayushi sounds good :)
Yay oh yay. Now I can claim I'm secretly writing this blog too, hee hee. =D
ReplyDeleteAnd is the picture a perfect compliment to the post or what? If only we could see the beauty of a flower, a tiny leaf, our lives would indeed change.
Nice one mam.. Err Ayushi....
ReplyDeleteSuperb, Ayushi!
ReplyDeleteShort and crisp...love it
ReplyDeleteIts evident that the writing comes from within Ayushi :)
ReplyDeleteNice one. Flows smoothly.
ReplyDeleteGreat Ayushi... all the best :)
ReplyDeletePainted the picture very well...Beautiful poem..
ReplyDeleteLovely words and congratulations for being reborn in blogosphere , Aayushi:)Writing does not certainly happened by accident in your case!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Ayushi!
ReplyDeleteDo you read Neruda?
ReplyDeletebeautifully written, very profound. you write lovely poems....
ReplyDeleteWriting comes from within, and you are filled with the words naturally! I love the new header :)
ReplyDeleteyour blog is beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteyour blog is beautiful :)
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Beautiful lines, Ayushi! You have a beautiful name!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fine name to be concealed in aliases and pen names Ayushi.
ReplyDeleteI wish you luck, and good fortune in all your creative endeavours :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Wow!! You are a born writer :)
ReplyDeleteHey, you hit the zone. Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteShort, sweet yet poignant. Nice work
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