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Little Moments Of Bliss is a silhouette of a feeling that resides in my heart. A software engineer by degree, a writer at heart, and a teacher by profession, I'm all that I never thought I would be. Pretty pictures,a poem that blatantly refuses to rhyme, a text from a deranged friend, a sudden gesture of love, its these little things in life, that matter and sprinkle bliss. Grace the couch and share a cuppa!

January 29, 2012

Happy Birthday [55Fiction #3]



"53 years of marriage and you still remain the most beautiful woman who has ever walked this earth for me"
 His wrinkles accompanied his signature cheshire smile.

"Sir, your coffee, less milk, no sugar".

"Happy Birthday sweetheart"

He pressed the picture to his lips and with two neat folds, kept it back into his wallet.


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39 comments:

  1. ArundhatiJanuary 29, 2012 at 10:26 PM

    This post gives me hope! The story gives me much more! :)

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    1. AyushiJanuary 31, 2012 at 6:59 AM

      Strangely, I was filled with hope too when I re-read it ;)

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  2. Nirali NaikJanuary 29, 2012 at 10:28 PM

    Awww :D Love that lives even after death :)

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  3. Brajmohan KumarJanuary 29, 2012 at 11:13 PM

    Love, unaffected by boundries of life and death :)

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  4. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 29, 2012 at 11:52 PM

    This was just beautiful!

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  5. Ms. CapriciousJanuary 30, 2012 at 12:14 AM

    Love .. and the pleasuarble pain it gives, never fading with years .. cute one :)

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    1. AyushiJanuary 31, 2012 at 7:20 AM

      I'm glad your capricious mood got uplifted with this one :P

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  6. ...January 30, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    Now THAT's true love =)

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  7. Lady WhispersJanuary 30, 2012 at 1:13 AM

    Wow :) I visit u after long and am still as much mesmerized :)

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    1. AyushiJanuary 31, 2012 at 7:22 AM

      Are you ? That means much. :)

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    2. Lady WhispersFebruary 1, 2012 at 12:42 AM

      btw its the Scribbling Gal if you remember I changed blogs and went hiding ;-)

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    3. AyushiFebruary 1, 2012 at 12:48 AM

      Oh yes, now I recognize ;)
      Why did you go hiding ?
      I actually haven't seen you for a long time now.

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    4. Lady WhispersFebruary 2, 2012 at 12:13 AM

      Just choose to go anonymous for personal reasons....you can find my blog link in my profile though :)
      And would be more regular visiting and blogging :)

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  8. KunalJanuary 30, 2012 at 2:02 AM

    Love, True. :)

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2012 at 2:43 AM

    How do you guys do this? A story in 55 words :) and that too with so much of depth, meaning and love.

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    1. AyushiJanuary 31, 2012 at 7:23 AM

      You can surely do this too :)
      This picture of yours is awesome :)

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  10. monamourJanuary 30, 2012 at 5:48 AM

    awww! so sweeet!

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  11. KPJanuary 30, 2012 at 10:39 AM

    In just 55 words.. the emotion is rightly conveyed.. :)

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  12. Saru SinghalJanuary 30, 2012 at 1:09 PM

    Undying love... Nothing can separate them...Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!!

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  13. Azra RaphaelJanuary 30, 2012 at 9:28 PM

    adorable! now that's the kind of story i wish i could pen/ keep up the awesomeness!

    love,raphe

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  14. RiàJanuary 31, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    Thats beautiful!! So touching.

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  15. CD!!!January 31, 2012 at 8:58 AM

    What else does someone want,thinking of that person even when he/she is not present.Loved it! :)

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  16. shash.destroyer@gmail.comJanuary 31, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    love...TRUE love, is really is an eternal emotion :)

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  17. SameeraJanuary 31, 2012 at 5:45 PM

    Aha.. classic 55!! :)

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  18. Ordinary GalFebruary 1, 2012 at 3:07 AM

    loved it completely :)

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  19. HemantFebruary 3, 2012 at 7:36 AM

    Its really touching Serendipity.....awesomely awesome...

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  20. SuruchiFebruary 4, 2012 at 1:51 AM

    Wow...it is amazing how sense can be made in 55 and so beautifully:-)

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  21. GVFebruary 12, 2012 at 4:26 AM

    Hii! First time on this page, read few posts and closed the window. Got back to my blog and its then did I realize.. mine and your blog title are so similar. Then it strucks again that we both write about good things unlike other bloggers (no offence) that usually write opinionatedly in a harsh manner (again no offence).. and wrote this comment.

    Was good to find a blog that states the good things in life.. :) Like I do :)

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Scribble some love !

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