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Little Moments Of Bliss is a silhouette of a feeling that resides in my heart. A software engineer by degree, a writer at heart, and a teacher by profession, I'm all that I never thought I would be. Pretty pictures,a poem that blatantly refuses to rhyme, a text from a deranged friend, a sudden gesture of love, its these little things in life, that matter and sprinkle bliss. Grace the couch and share a cuppa!

January 29, 2012

Happy Birthday [55Fiction #3]



"53 years of marriage and you still remain the most beautiful woman who has ever walked this earth for me"
 His wrinkles accompanied his signature cheshire smile.

"Sir, your coffee, less milk, no sugar".

"Happy Birthday sweetheart"

He pressed the picture to his lips and with two neat folds, kept it back into his wallet.


45 comments:

  1. This post gives me hope! The story gives me much more! :)

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    1. Strangely, I was filled with hope too when I re-read it ;)

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  2. Awww :D Love that lives even after death :)

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  3. Love, unaffected by boundries of life and death :)

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  4. Love .. and the pleasuarble pain it gives, never fading with years .. cute one :)

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    1. I'm glad your capricious mood got uplifted with this one :P

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  5. Wow :) I visit u after long and am still as much mesmerized :)

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    1. btw its the Scribbling Gal if you remember I changed blogs and went hiding ;-)

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    2. Oh yes, now I recognize ;)
      Why did you go hiding ?
      I actually haven't seen you for a long time now.

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    3. Just choose to go anonymous for personal reasons....you can find my blog link in my profile though :)
      And would be more regular visiting and blogging :)

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  6. How do you guys do this? A story in 55 words :) and that too with so much of depth, meaning and love.

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    1. You can surely do this too :)
      This picture of yours is awesome :)

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  7. In just 55 words.. the emotion is rightly conveyed.. :)

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  8. Undying love... Nothing can separate them...Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!!

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  9. adorable! now that's the kind of story i wish i could pen/ keep up the awesomeness!

    love,raphe

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  10. Thats beautiful!! So touching.

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  11. What else does someone want,thinking of that person even when he/she is not present.Loved it! :)

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  12. love...TRUE love, is really is an eternal emotion :)

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  13. Its really touching Serendipity.....awesomely awesome...

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  14. Wow...it is amazing how sense can be made in 55 and so beautifully:-)

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  15. Hii! First time on this page, read few posts and closed the window. Got back to my blog and its then did I realize.. mine and your blog title are so similar. Then it strucks again that we both write about good things unlike other bloggers (no offence) that usually write opinionatedly in a harsh manner (again no offence).. and wrote this comment.

    Was good to find a blog that states the good things in life.. :) Like I do :)

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Scribble some love !