With the sweet morning breeze of fresh spring,
you sway along;
Making my feet, fly and dance with a desire so
strong,
I wish, eternity shall last until eternity;
For it is with you, that I belong,
And your heartbeat plays,
My favorite song.
PS - Inspiration credits - Lil Wayne
Wow! Just brilliant!
ReplyDeleteAnd your heartbeat plays,
My favorite song.
I am in awe!
Thank You Love :)
DeleteI wish eternity shall last until eternity.... beautiful!! Superlike! :)
ReplyDeleteThats my favorite line too :)
DeleteAwesome lines!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines..:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Mnet :)
Deletesweet and beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Bharathi ;)
DeleteLook whose writing poetry :D Love :D <3
ReplyDeletehaha, you caught me ;)
DeleteThat was cute!
ReplyDeleteThanks Harish :)
DeleteYou have become a pro with just two poems!Good going:)
ReplyDeleteYou've always been this generous :)
Deletebeautiful lines...brilliant... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarabjeet :)
DeleteLight and breezy !!
ReplyDeletewas meant to be ;)
DeleteOoooh that was beautiful indeed :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Mark ;)
Deleteu say so much in little lines ayu! That is quite an art! :)
ReplyDeletePs- I miss you.
I miss you too Twish :*
DeleteLovellllllllly! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You sweety :)
DeleteFew lines you write convey so much! Loved this :)
ReplyDeleteI try ;)
DeleteNever had a thing for it, eh? And, what is this? :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
:D Thanks :)
Deleteeach line is extraordinary! brilliant! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Diksha :)
DeleteHeya I really like this poem thanks for sharing ^.^
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteSort & so sweet !
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteI apologise - this is more of a rather generic comment, but it's the done thing. For I have read your work since a while and I must say, I'm taken by your ability to really play with words and weave such beauty out of them, no matter how brief.
ReplyDeleteThis post only validates my belief. :)
It was a very very sweet thing to say to a fellow blogger Rose :) I'm glad you've been reading for a while now. I don't know why, I haven't been able to write long write-ups for quite some time now.
DeleteThank You soo much :)
Awww so cute :)
ReplyDeleteCS :)
Deleteaaaah so well said :) made my heart fill with sunshine !
ReplyDeleteand mine with happiness :)
DeleteStill in a mood to celebrate Valentine's day, aren't we? ;)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines.
can't say :)
DeleteThank You :)
This is so sweet. The ending is brilliant...:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Saru di :)
DeleteAnd your heartbeat plays,
ReplyDeleteMy favorite song.
just awesome..
Thank You Sumukh ;)
DeleteQuite beautiful...
ReplyDelete:):)
DeleteBeautiful. Love the last 2 lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leo ;)
DeleteLast 3 lines=Just amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome Jen ;) Thank You :)
DeleteAww it's so beautiful and amazing! I love it, keep it up! n.n
ReplyDeleteThanks Kali ;)
Deletewow beautiful... loved it :D
ReplyDeleteunplugged... ver sweet, keep murmuring and you fly high...
ReplyDeleteI did :)
Deleteso adorable!
ReplyDeletethe right song for this post would be "stereohearts"
=)
the poem is packed with the love!
is it ? ;)
DeleteWow :) Awesome one :D :).
ReplyDeleteJust LOVED the last 2 lines :).
Perfect one :).
Loved it :D
Thank You Love ;)
DeleteJust loved the poem dear :D :).
ReplyDeleteYour NEW FAN + FOLLOWER here :D :).
This is sooooo beautiful-dipped in love and drenched in feelings...makes you feel warm instantly:-)
ReplyDeleteSuch lovely portrayal of my poem :)
DeleteThank You :)
wow! wonder why I didn't find you earlier.? have spend some time reading other posts too and totally in love withyour blog. You are def. going down the blog roll which I am creating.
ReplyDeleteGlad to have found you at Indiblogger. Your newest follower and a regular visitor now.
cheers
Kajal
Grateful :)
DeleteWelcome here Kajal :)
beautiful poem...
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"I wish eternity shall last until eternity."
ReplyDeleteAhhh, if only!
If only ;)
DeleteMy heartbeat plays a song of delirious joy when I read my favourite people, hear Chris Martin or simply fall in love with with the best people all over again.
ReplyDeleteThis was gorgeous. The best artist is always one who says it with a few words.
I am going to feed on all your texts in a while x :)
And your comments fill my heart with such sweet delirium :)
DeleteThank You Love :*
Little moments of Bliss, this blog's title!
ReplyDeleteAnd your posts prove what bliss means, actually! Beautiful words!
Thank You so much sweetie :)
DeleteDance along girl, to the tunes of love :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
This is just beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Philo :)
DeleteAnd you say poems are not your forte? :) Lovely!
ReplyDeleteI'm exploring this new area of your expertise and let me tell you, it feels beautiful :)
Deletewow..just WOW! :)
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